September 23, 2006

PP #5 script online

The final chapter of the first PEACE PARTY saga is online for your inspection.

There isn't much Indian lore this time around, but please check it anyway. Look for plot points that are unclear, characterizations that don't make sense, pacing problems, structural flaws, etc. All criticisms are welcome.

1 comment:

Rob said...

It probably would be good to e-mail me comments at rather than post them here. Especially if they're specific rather than general.